Besides, a dodgy discourse marker
I’ve just been giving feedback on a piece of writing by a
non-native speaker and came across a common misuse of the word besides in a
sentence initial position as a discourse marker/linker. The writer has used it
to add another point, in a fairly neutral way, as you might use ‘and’ or ‘also’,
or perhaps ‘in addition’.
“I work at a language institute […] Besides, I tutor
business students one-to-one.”
(that’s a paraphrase, but it keeps the sense)
(that’s a paraphrase, but it keeps the sense)
It’s a usage I’ve come across countless times in students’
essays and one I always flag up or correct, but generally avoiding commenting
on because it’s tricky to put your finger on exactly what’s wrong about it. If
you look in a learner’s dictionary, you’ll find a rather neutral definition like
“in addition to; also” and sometimes a note which hints at something more:
Macmillan Dictionary: used when you are adding another stronger
reason to support what you are saying
Collins COBUILD: Besides is used to emphasize an
additional point that you are making, especially one that you consider to be
important
OALD: The adverb besides is mainly used to give
another reason or argument for something
I don’t think any of them really get to the
heart of how this seemingly simple little word is actually used though. That’s
not to criticize the dictionaries, which are only trying to be as concise as
possible and do show more using examples, but there’s just quite a lot going
on. After a bit of thought and looking at quite a few examples, I think you
use besides when you’re trying to
make an argument, you’ve set out some points, then you want to introduce your
final trump card. The besides means
something like, “even if you weren’t convinced by everything I’ve just said,
this last point trumps all of those and means I win hands down”.
A few corpus examples:
Shelly gave up looking for work. She said that she had too many projects of her own to concentrate on, and besides, she just wasn't "the office type." [COCA]
Shelly gave up looking for work. She said that she had too many projects of her own to concentrate on, and besides, she just wasn't "the office type." [COCA]
Your shoes are clean and neat. That is all that matters. Besides,
we can't afford [new ones]. [COCA]
After a while, they stopped. There didn't seem much point in
continuing. Besides, they were out of breath. [BNC]
I just thought you had enough to be getting on with, what
with Jennifer. I didn't want to add to the problems. Besides,
there wasn't anything you could do. [BNC]
As I looked through more examples, I also started to get the
sense that this usage is fairly conversational, or at least used in writing
that’s conversational in style. That led me to take a look at a more formal
genre; academic writing in the BAWE corpus (of university student writing). At
first I was a bit surprised to find quite a few examples of sentence initial Besides, … . But then when I delved
further, I found that the majority of the examples (89%) were from non-native
speaker writers, largely with Chinese L1 (that compares with something like 70%
native-speaker scripts within the BAWE corpus as a whole). Although they were
good writers of English, with good grades for their assignments, the usage
still stood out as slightly marked. Perhaps an indication that, like me, no one
could ever quite put their finger on what was odd about the usage, so had never
corrected it for these writers.
Especially for new academic writers, discourse markers are a
real minefield. We’re always telling EAP students how important they are to
link their ideas together, but then when they choose the wrong ones, they jar
and almost have the opposite effect on the reader (raising doubts about the
logic of the ideas they link). I hope that in future, this is one pitfall that
I’ll be better at proactively steering my students around.
PS Of course, all this ignores the apparently very similar,
but actually very different usage: besides (preposition) + object, but that’s a
topic for another day …
Labels: academic writing, connotation, corpus research, discourse markers, EAP, marked language
3 Comments:
Oh, my goodness. My exact feeling on the subject of "besides" as a discourse marker. I'm marking a non-native speaker's paper and I was checking out the same dictionaries to support my view that it is informal and inappropriate, which led me here. I do change it on essays and say it's informal. Just thought I'd check it out today!
Would writing 'Besides this' do the trick? I found the following in COCA (ACAD)
. . . and Cyclospora species, resulting in confusion of diagnosis. Besides this, all oocysts in the same suspension do not exhibit autofluorescence under ultraviolet
Cecilia, yes, that was the comment I made in my PS at the end of the post. Besides + object is a slightly different construction.
In my experience though, students try to use 'besides' on its own as a lone discourse marker (I think because it's taught as such in some places). They tend to use it in very neutral contexts where something like 'also' or 'in addition' would fit better.
Although 'besides + obj' is a valid structure, I think it also carries a bit more meaning - it's about adding a surprising or tangential point or, as in your example, yet another complicating factor. It's saying, "even if we leave all that to one side ...". It isn't simply a neutral way of adding another point.
Julie
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